I am consistently impressed with your layouts. They are very inventive and add to the cap. You're writing hits all the right squeamish notes too. I'm not sure if you've ever seen my caps on http://smittysimon.blogspot.com/ but I've made a lot. Since I've seen you asking for feedback, I hope you don't mind if I leave some here. I think your caps would be improved with a little more individualization in the characters. Some of your caps have more personality than others and those are the ones that always stick with me. Maybe try writing some from the first person perspective? Also I like the caps you do here way more than on your other blog or image fap. They are well done, but the racial aspects ruin it for me. I think these stories have more room to grow and would recommend focusing your efforts here. Just my 2 cents.