Monday, October 27, 2014

Feminization Caption Story - Long Distance Love

This caption story is a lot longer (in terms of text) than I usually write.   I always get the pictures ready first, then write the story to suit them, but with this one, I found myself going back to find more and more pictures so that I could tell the story I wanted to tell.  In the end, it turned out to be a little over twenty-five pages long (when most of my caption stories are about half that). 

The story itself was inspired by a text story I wrote (and posted on Fictionmania), named Gene.  It's a similar premise, but the details are changed quite a bit.  I also wanted to go a little deeper into the consequences of such a change.  Either way, I think it's a solid piece, and I hope you all enjoy it.



























11 comments:

  1. I love the transformation in this one! Some lesbian (transbian) sex would be cool too in future stories, where our sissy is still submissive, of course!

    Erica

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    1. I actually try to incorporate lesbian sex (via strap-on) into most of my stories because it's a far more believable transition from straight guy to taking a strap-on to sleeping with men than simply skipping that middle step. At least, that's how I think of it. However, finding suitable lesbian scenes for each model can get difficult. Thus, I leave that out from time to time.

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    1. Thanks. I had this one sitting on my hard drive, waiting to be framed for almost three months. I had the pictures finished, and the story written for a while before I broke down and decided to put it all together. It's not that it's a lot of work (it's somewhat time consuming, but most of this is). It's more that it's tedious, framing the pictures. There's little art to it, especially when I'm going for a lengthy set of pictures like this.

      Whatever the case, I'm glad you liked it.

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  3. i love the longer ones! if i purposefully tried to come up with a complaint its that i feel sorry for Marcy...

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    1. Good. I think it's important that the villain of the story doesn't seem so one-dimensional. That was the purpose of that last frame. You're supposed to empathize with Marcy because it's easy to relate to someone who took outrageous steps to cope with what amounts to a broken heart. So rather than taking it as a complaint, I take that as a compliment.

      I know this is all just porn, but I try to dig a little deeper than that when I write. I don't know how possible it is to actually care about the characters in erotic fiction, but I certainly view it as a challenge to cross that bridge. I don't know if I'm up to it, but I think I've come close a few times. Or at least I hope I have.

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  4. Who the hell is the stunning guy in the second picture? He's absolutely beautiful.

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    1. The first two "before" pictures are of a male model named Marlon Teixera. I chose it because he looks so different without the scruffy facial hair. It makes the transformation a little more believable.

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  5. I wish I cud be a model for one of these stories

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  6. I love it. but most of it is unreadable.

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    1. Right click, select "View Image," and zoom in.

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