Terrific story! I really enjoyed this!
Thanks - I got a little carried away with it - which is why the font is so small.
Love all your work and have since you started posting but this story had to get a comment. Excellent twist near the end and the victim turns outto be the so called tough guy. Great work!!
When I first started the caption, I had absolutely no plan to end it like that. If I'm honest, I did it because doing it as planned would have resulted in a much longer story (for which I simply didn't have room). Still, I think it turned out well. And I LOVE the picture.
Now I want to have that market New Life?
Fantastic story. Very glad you made the changed in what you had planned, and well worth having to deal with a smll font.
I agree - happy accidents, I suppose.