Thursday, August 4, 2016

Feminization Caption Story - The Witness


A few days ago, I alluded to this caption story, and I have to say, I think it turned out pretty well.  I love Amarna Miller (the primary model) - if you don't know who she is, look her up.  She's not just a porn star (though she's really good at that too - absolutely gorgeous).  The modifications I made (quite a few, if you can believe it) came out well, and the face swaps were as flawless as I've ever done. 

As to the story - well, it wasn't originally supposed to be so long.  But it kept growing until it became (easily) the longest caption story I've created.  And I hope it's one of the best.  However, I'll have to bow to your judgment on that.  I hope you enjoy it.











































































6 comments:

  1. That was truly one of your best stories. There is so much character growth and just the right amount of kink. My only hope would be to know the rest of the story as the ending really hit me like a wall. Got to the last panel and was truly shocked there wasn't more. Well done.

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    1. Thanks. In my original concept, I wasn't going to include so many ups and downs; I completely intended it to be a fairly straightforward, "witness protection" story. But I sort of got carried away, and the character started to grow (in part, because the model has so much visual personality). And the ending...well, I never intended for it to end like that, but I realized that, as I got to the last few frames, there was no way Olivia was going to have a "happy" ending. She might get what she wants (relationship, revenge, etc.), but she's been through so much that it's virtually impossible that she'd come out of it all without some serious issues. And I thought the best way to convey that was with a bit of a "depressed" viewpoint going into the future.

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  2. I agree that this is one of your best. I can see why you ended it the way that you did, but I too wouldn't mind learning what comes next in Olivia's story.
    However, you should be proud of this one. Excellent story!

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    1. As I alluded to in the previous reply, I truly don't think Olivia will ever be happy. She might be content, but she never intended to become a woman. That's not really who she is though she's come to accept (and even enjoy) it. Couple that with the inevitable depression resulting from patricide (regardless of who kills Seamus, she's responsible, and you have a recipe for a very screwed up individual. She'll have periods of "happiness" but each time things don't go her way, she'll focus on the larger dissatisfaction with her adopted gender identity. Probably end up on a slew of anti-depressants until she finds something to focus her life on. Maybe as a parent. Or a driven career woman. Or more likely, as the heir to her father's criminal organization (given that she's already shown at least some level of ruthlessness).

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  3. That was an amazing story! So well written and thought out! I also would be interested in knowing what comes next, even if Olivia is a wreck of a person for some reason the curiosity of the continuation of her story is extremely strong!

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    1. Thanks. The irony of you saying that it was well-thought-out is that I switched gears about a third of the way through, and didn't use my outline at all after that. It was the least structured (caption) story I've written in a long time. Some of the plot points were on-the-spot thoughts that flourished.

      This story was different in a lot of ways, really. Instead of selecting a model, and finding pictures, I saw a picture set (the "threesome set" with the sister), and the story grew from there. It was also a bit of a departure from me because it had a minimal number of nudes in it - mostly because the model (Amarna Miller) is so different from the majority of porn stars on the internet.

      Anyway - glad you liked it. I certainly enjoyed writing it.

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