Wow...that one was dark. Still good, though.
Yeah - I'm writing kind of a dark story right now, and it sort of affected my mindset while I was writing this one. Glad it was well-received though.
Agreed, a really nasty cap.Keep up the good work :)
Thanks. Glad you liked it!
Dark is an understatement, it's actually cruel. Not to say that the father in this was a saint but the son is down right worse. The son has pretty much become what he objectively despises his own father.
Oh, it's meant to be cruel. I think it's important to be reminded that most of these antagonists are NOT justified in what they do. While it seems interesting and sexy to us, think about this from a normal man's perspective. Not only has he lost his entire identity, but he's been forced into sexual slavery. It's not a happy story, by any stretch, and the narrator is a horrible person. That's an inescapable fact.
Hmm, interesting. I just assumed dad was transformed by his daughter, not his son, which could possibly make it even darker, depending on what was the source of that revenge. I liked it.
I'd love to see a whole caption story based on this premise!
I'm actually working on one right now (a commissioned story) that has a lot in common with this caption. It's not about a father/son, but rather a couple. However, the tone is really similar. I haven't written a really dark, true forced feminization story in a while, so I figured it was about time. I should have it finished soon, but it won't be published until next month.
love it when you get mean! more like this
It goes a bit against my typical tone, but I like to switch it up from time to time.
I actually get great pleasure out of this story as my father abused me. Thankyou, this was a beautiful piece in some ways.