I would almost love to see this story developed into a longer caption series, if it could even be done. The storyline would be amazing in my opinion.
It was actually inspired by a text story I read a while back called "Becoming Jin-Yu". While the plot's different, the idea behind it (race and gender change) remains. You can find the story at: http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=3004&ageconsent=ok&warning=3
Ouch. Sometimes I guess you're better off not knowing.